Viz Vampir application

Name: Viz Vampir
Age: 215
Gender: Male

Orientation: Freelancer

Appearance: Long silver hair, Norrmal build, 6 feet tall, wats left of hollow mask is a thorny vine like choker neclace. His hollow hole is in the middle of his chest where the heart that represents love is supposed to be.

Personality: Pink frosting runs throught my veins .
He tends to be very happy all the time and just wants to have a good time. He can also be very narcisistic at times and he shows this in battle when ever his clothes gets dammaged and is sent into a rage like state.
Because he was tortured in the process of becoming an arrancar whenever he sees someone being tortured he tends to remember what he locked away in his subcouncious and becomes deeply scared of everyone around him and seals himself in a cristal like rosebud.

Abilities: 1. Nayamashii Gyoushi (Seductive Gaze): Viz's eyes turn pink and he starts looking into the opponents mind trying to find weak spot. This can also be used to look into the opponents mind to find information if the opponent is at the same level of strenght as Viz. This can also be used to control lower level hollows and other simple minded things such as animals. Completely useless is the opponent has a strong will.
2. Shiro Kokoro (White Heart): Special cero attack. Viz charges a heart shaped cero from his hollow hole. The size and strength of this cero can be changed by his will and can serve differrent pourposes. The size and strength also depends on the reiatsu in the area. If used in an area of high reiatsu the charging time, strength, and size increase while in areas of low reiatsu they decrease. ith can erath strenght of a Grand Rey Cero, the speed of Bala and twice the users body size.
3. Saigo Jounetsu (Last Passion): After sustaining a masive damage that surpasses his Hierro Saigo Jounetsu kicks in. Viz starts glowing a red hue and his Hierro is capable of defending against the same amount of force that made Saigo jounetsu activate. If Viz is to weak when it activates then he will be sent into a blind rage that makes him fight with no common sence all to mantain sefl preservation.
4.Plant Mastery: He can bend plants to his will and he uses them for all sorts of pourposes.
5. Science Expert: He has outstanding knoledge in all areas of science.

Sealed Zanpakutô: Normal katana. Compleately black.

[b]Release: He has two releases due to the nature of being created from 2 different spiritual beings. Iseki no Shinigami; Hoshi no hikari kirakira, Hoshi no bara(Historic remains of a shinigami; Starlight sparkle, Star Rose) Shi, Dark Rose.... ( Die, Dark Rose)

Resurrección: Shi, Dark Rose: Dark smoke surrounds him. After it clears he is surrounded in black rose petals and body is surrounded in a thorny knight like armor he has a rapier hilt with no blade on it. Here his all his plant abilities are augmented and his armor provides a very high rate of protection. The rose petals around him serve as his blade and can command them to attack in any way possible.
Iseki no Shinigami; Hoshi no hikari kirakira, Hoshi no bara: Viz Gets his shinigami clothes back on and his katana turns into a broadsword composed of 2 intertwining blades. Here he has acces to special kido that he created when he was still a shinigami.

History: During the peak of the Edo period in Japan Viz was a happy beutiful 24 year old full of life an energy. He was know to be the town rule breaker and go against the norms of society but that didnt matter to him at all. One spring day he was swiming in the lake when he saw a man and they both imediately fell in love with each other. That man also told Viz that he was the emperor and soon enough Viz became the emperors right hand man. But when the Emperor saw viz being friends with another guy he gave the order that Viz be killed imedietly. After hearing this viz felt betrayed and after his death he wandered around aimlessly until his Soul chain ran out and became a hollow and went to Hueco Mundo
In Hueco Mundo he was a small hollow with immense spiritual pressure and continued eating weaker ,and sometimes stronger hollows until he became an Arrancar. When Aizen came to hueco Mundo he took interest in Viz and sent him to Szayel for a secret testing. This test was to make a sort of hybrid between an hollow and a Shinigami this creating the ultimate warrior by converting a hollow into an arrancar. viz endured years and years of immense torture and hollow absorptions and at the end it all failed all that was close was making a shikai like ressurection that only allowed the use of weak kido that were comprised of the elements.
Aizen also during this time abused of Viz creating a false pretence of love that viz fell into. But just like the Emperor Aizen betreyed him and threw him out like garbage after the experiments failed.And now using his new found powers he escaped Hueco Mundo and left for the human world as he vowed he would make aizen pay for all the damage he has caused.

RP Sample: ..He would stare deeply into the opponents eyes. Having tortured the opponent enough he would start looking through his brain neuron by neuron for the desired information to complete his objective.
.. He would place his hands on the ground giant thorny vines sprouting all around the enemies feet encarcelating him inside a thorny forest as then the vines would turn into rock as blood red roses would grow on them and start to absorb reiatsu..

Skill Level: Hierro: Adept/
Skill Level: Pesquisa: Beginner/
Skill Level: Sonido: Beginner/
Skill Level: Cero/Bala: Beginner/

Please rework this.

Denied because of the history. Please add more detail to your history. Also give us a better RP sample. Everything else looks good to me.

ok in your history you said a hybrid between arrancar and shinigami, did you mean Hollow and shinigami?

I see nothing wrong

Accepted

Tier is 3-3