Phrozens entry: Zeth and Doom fang

Name: Zeth


Gender:Male

Age:15

The Host Race: human

Personality:He is some what Lazy and naps in almost all of his class he is intelligent for his age becasue he has never failed a test even though he gets more detention and naps in class more than the typical student. he is always sad becasue off his past and smiles rarely. He sometimes loses control of his anger and get inot alot of fights some with the teacher which lead him to be expel twiced but was lucky to getinot another school.
Appearance:

Background/History: Born in Karakura Town, attending Everglades Academy. nobody wanted to be around him because of sort of ailment he has that is brought upon by the Ziamachi inside which he himself doesn't know of till he encounters a hallow then learns about his history of his clan.He lives alone in an apartment because at the age of 9 his farther died and his mother went on drugs. at the age of 13 she could no longer house Zeth becuase of her addiction and bought him an aprtment of his own. Ever since he iscolated him self from the kids at school and grew ill every passing day. the illnesses become more and more stronger each leaving him weaker and weaker.Then the day comes when he encounters his first hallow and learns of the creature dwelling inside. He then manges to make a deal with the creature and soon he was no longer sick.He began to have sudden burst of energy and at times argue withthe Ziamachi. Though their disaggreements they still mange to pull through tough situations no matter how hard it may be. Though the Ziamchi is under controll for now he still wants to be free and well do anything to get his freedom even if it means killing his host.

Ziamichi Spirit:Doom fang. A dark ill tempered, blood thristy wolf that hates the person he is sealed within and struggles for control over the human or try to escape

Ziamichi History: A wolf that killed many ziamachi and their host dues to being disgusted of the unlikely bond between human or shinigami.He believed that the Ziamachi
should be independent creatures and not be bound to humans and any Ziamichis that were sealed into a human would be killed immediately. He then set out on a hunt to kill the different clans so the Ziamachis could be independt race of creatures on not chained to anything. He of course worked alone because he perffered it to be like this he didnt feel to bring any other Ziamchi into this because he didnt know how to fight in a group his attempts later failed in destroying the humans or shinigami who had a Ziamachi and he was sealed into the Zeth. Where he reamined for 15 years still trying to find his way out of his host.

Ziamichi powers: the ability to heal wounds quickly summon a pack of wolves that looks just like him , fire lasers out his mouth, super strength and incredibly speed and also rip apart things with his claws that can cut through anything.

Unique Traits: To learn things faster than anyone else

Forms: 1. Shadow whelmed: he emanates a black aura and his strength increased by the Ziamachi and his speed as well which happens when Him and Doom fang have stteld their differences . 2. Enraged wolf: The aura is thicker and he begins to look more like the wolf and also where the Ziamachi gives him his healing ability and this happens when he is starting to lose control. 3. Enraged Shadow wolf: The Ziamachi and the human combined turning into something looking like a were wolf with all of the Ziamachi ability's are unlocked and this happens when Zeths get too enraged and surpasses that level but also have a higher chance of losing control.

Control: 6

Ziamichi Class: (Ranging from E to the weakest and A to the strongest; With S being a special class of demons. Don't do anything to this, the staff will decide how strong your demon will be from how good your application is and how good your role playing skills are.)

Drawbacks: the Ziamachi takes full control and destroy the ones close to him. His friend gets hurt and nearly kills his master who is trying to teach him how to take control of his Ziamachi

Rp Sample:It was an average day in karakura town ,school was still in session and people were walking about as a normal Routine. Zeth was napping on his desk. The teacher then notices Zeth sleeping through her class. She then hit his desk with a ruler causing him to wake up. she then shouts on the top her voice,'Zeth this is the fourth time napping in my class if you continue ill make sure that you get a week of detention. He then looks up at the teacher with his eyes red from exhaust then falls back to sleep. She got so angry she snapped the ruler in half and sent him to the principle's office.

Its 5:30 and he is just leaving school. He takes a different way home because he hasn't traveled it this late so he thinks it might be safe. He then thinks to himself 'I can believe the teacher gave me 3 weeks of detention and i hate coming home this late. He then pauses and looks around. He begins hearing roars and smell something foul and rotting by this scent he relaises what it may be. A dark voice then says to him,"Its another hollow,perfect can we go after it? Zeth then replies ,"Why bother let some other guy handle it im to tired and im starving". "Come on! we havent done much in the past few weeks!",complained the dark voice."Okay Doom just this once",he answerd yawning. He runs to where the Hollow is at his amazing speed and begins to let off some spirtual pressure , jumps and kicks the hollow in the mask casing to break which after that he jumps off then he runs twaords it again and finshies it off with a punch which the hollow manges to block but simply didnt stand a chance against the amazing strenght of Zeth and gets thrown into a wall causing dust to rise up. He disappears in the cloud of dust.

Alright, you omitted the RP Sample, so please add that.

Personality needs to be a paragraph or more.

History needs to be 2 Paragraphs and Ziamichi History 2 paragraphs as well.

That's not a unique trait either.

Quote :

3. Enraged Shadow wolf: The ziamachi and the human combined turning into something looking like the a were wolf with all of the Ziamachi ability's are unlocked and do 200% more damage.

First off, there are no standard Ziamichi abilities.

Second off, 200%? A bit high.

Also, please go more in-depth with your forms.

Yeah, seriously, listen to Tsubine. Just fix some of that shit in your application and we will accept it, bro.