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The ho'hum feeling of life has overcome the chaotic style of living that was active around Earth after the larger-then-life battle with Lord Ender; Which revealed the existence of Shinigami, Hollows and even demons. The madness which had happened in Japan had spread like a virus all throughout the world. Luckily, though, before the insanity could even reach a high level; The Soul Society sent out many diplomatic figures throughout the world of the living.

Each of these diplomatic people were sent out to calm the public, work with local and national governments, stop riots from taking place and to stop any human from foolishly going after a shinigami, hollow or demon. Eventually, the world simply got use to the existence of these creatures and let their governments, along with the Gotei 13, handle these things. Of course their were a number of organizations who were against this and had their own dark agenda, but the Governments of the world would stop these people easily with the help of shinigami.

Yes, yes. The normal way of life would prevail eventually. The only difference now is that humans were more aware of their surroundings and more cautious of these beings.

But this is only temporary... There is still much evil yet to be unleashed on the world... There are still many battles to be fought, many people to be killed, many lifes to be forever changed. It may be peaceful for the moment, but all of this will soon change.

Kin Iramasha, founder and leader of the Kokuryuteshi, intends to start a war with the Soul Society. First, they will gather enough members in their army to fight against The Iramasha on Iramasha Island. Their forces will be great and in many numbers, that's when the Iramasha will upon the Gotei 13, The Suigara clan and the Karakura Defenders for assistance with this threat. That's when the mother of all brawls will happen upon Iramasha Island and throughout the Soul Society since the Gotei 13 believes Kin and his followers are too much of threat and need to die.


He also intends to convert everyone to his army either by force or a mass version of Chaos Soul; killing anyone resisting his will. After that, he intends to wipe out the Soul Society, Earth, Demon World and Hueco Mundo. Once that is completed he will have his armies rebuild the worlds in his own image.

But that's not the worse of it. He's also aiming to destroy other worlds, galaxies, universes and even Alternative Dimensions in order to spread his army even further and give everyone in power their own world.

He and Andrei, Commander of military Operations and Kin's right hand man, have also been experimenting on creating their own realms and planets as well just incase they have to destroy everything.

But Andrei simply wants to destroy everything, unlike Kin. Which is where problems will arise later on as well.

And that's not the only threat looming over the horizon for humanity...

Sensing the tension in the Soul Society, Demons will begin to strike Earth and Hueco Mundo. Hueco Mundo will be a secondary target due them needing more space to house their expanding race. However, the main reason they are invading Earth is to un-seal their King, Touketsu, from the body of Ketsu and free his pets; Oni Chiita, Kutogatshi annd many others selaed inside Ziamichi's.

However, there is a reason why he is still the king of demon world even though he is sealed. He's promised the Demons Immortal life after the eradication of all over beings on Earth. How would he do this? Well, he knows for certain that death has a physical body now and knows how to tap into that power.

There are TRILLIONS of souls just waiting to be free'd or used in the wrong way inside of this mother fucker. Although it isn't anything like a human, hollow, demon or any type of body we know.

And only Touketsu knows where it is sealed. Touketsu was also once apart of Death as well. He wanted to see what it was like to tap into that power thousands of years ago. ...and even he said it was too much for him to do. The agony, insaity and depersation of those souls were so intense it nearly drove him to insanity from their sheer will. He would have to come back when he was stronger.

From all sides, it seems Earth is racing towards a destation with death.

Which side will prevail?


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Name: Ichiryu, Kenzurai

Gender: Male

Age: 30

Personality: Kenzurai is a serious, silent, cool person who has a heart far from other people. He always been caught sleeping under the clouds of the grassfield instead of getting involved on some activities and heavy responsibilities. He is also a silent guy who never talk to anybody, a person who save words and a person who hates long answers same with answering several questions. Other people commented that he is always indifferent to other people including to his sensei. He hates being forced to cooperate and hates to be forced by somebody. Even though he shows a bad attitude, Ken has a great charisma when it comes to girls. Also, for his entire life, despite being popular towards females due to being handsome and cool, Ken showed absolutely no interest in any of these women

Appearance:

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Kenzurai has black hair with a blue tint and onyx eyes. He has lighter skin than others had. Like many other members of his clan, his hair hangs over both sides of his face to roughly frame his cheeks. A recurring theme in Kenzurai’s appearance is that he is considered quite handsome by almost all girls near his age.

Background/History:

Kenzurai Uchiryu was an adopted child of the Katsuyu Clan, a very popular family which handles the most richest companies of the country. He was adopted by Katsuyu Gintama, his father's closest friend that seems like a brother. Their family was in an accident and Kenzurai was the only survivor but a trauma with him. Gintama promised in the front of his father's tomb that Kenzurai will be raised properly that he would surpass all his father's success, and grow as the richest and best businessman on the planet. He was still 5 years old when he was adopted, so there's no enough problem for Gintama as he knows Kenzurai doesn't understand the situation well but he was wrong. Kenzurai's trauma on the death memory of his parents was unforgettable, the explosions and the bloody persons infront of him, it was like a tatoo.

Kenzurai turned 15, became more mature as the time passed, became taller, muscular, and good in sports as expected from his foster father. He is also a genius when it comes to math and advanced chemistry, a maniac on solving hard problems without a scratch paper. His grades was the best among the students of the best school but his attitude was the main problem. Even having a brain, Kenzurai wasn't a good student. Being a genius, a lot of teachers especially the unexperienced, walked out because of arguing on Kenzurai until they realized they were the one who is wrong. Kenzurai also entered different clubs in the school, his performance was impressive especially on musical instruments but he end up quitting like insulting their part. He was also far from other students, not having a friend, not because of his attitude but because he don't like being in the noisy crowd, also he stated he can't trust someone. He was also a heart-throb that most of the ladies near his age were getting a crush on him, sometimes, dying hard on him. He was punished by his foster father because of becoming so perfect yet so bad by sending him out of the mansion for a week, no allowance, no credit card.

Walking on the streets, Kenzurai brought a little of his money from his daily allowance that was enough for him to eat once a day. On the 3rd to 5th day of the week, Kenzurai found fights and troubles on different groups of gansters. Because he was able to master sports like taekwondo, he got a high endurance. Until the groups of gangsters united, they planned on setting an ambush when they find Kenzurai. It was a rainy day, Kenzurai was walking very weak hungry. He doesn't know where to go, his eyes were blurring until he found a group of people infront of him., they were the gangsters. They messes up with Kenzaki, killing him softly, until Kenzurai finished some of them, a guy shot him with a gun on head. Kenzurai died in the middle of the rain with opened bleeding eyes. "Mothr .. Father .. I'm coming .." his last words.

Kenzurai waked up and expecting that it was the heaven where he could find his parents. "Stand Up" he heard someone saying it to him. He stand up and saw a girl with a katana on her waist and said "Welcome .. cutie .. welcome to the world of Soul Society" said with a smile. Instead of getting surprised, he smiled and followed the lady. After knowing the whole truth, Kenzurai became a Shinigami of the Soul Society. He trained himself more
than he could on the human world, his goal was to be a captain of one of the divisions and become very very strong. When he graduated at the Academy, Ken was immediately recruited by the Kido Corps and became a member.

It was night, Kenzurai was drinking tea in the middle of the night. He was still a low-leveled shinigami after all so he is planning to have a training after the relaxation. As the wind blows, and grass moves, Kenzurai already knew that there is another person around so he draw his Zanpakuto and drink the last cup of tea. Kenzurai was his eyes moving, trying to figure out where's the sound coming from, he measured it by the sound speed formula but it still hard for him to do it. Suddenly, another Shinigami dashed infront of him making a stab so Kenzurai immediately moved his feet, performing his footwork to redirect the attack using his blade. As he see the enemy, it was his friend from the Katsuyu family who heard the story about his shinigami sensei and was afraid that Kenzurai would be the legacy of him so he decided to kill Kenzurai before Kenzurai would. "Hey .. what's this gimmick, Ikuto ?" he asked with his serious voice while his sword is pointing to his friend. His friend, Ikuto sweating and obviously doubt shivered making no answer instead he shouted and said "Go !!!". It was the signal were his other teammates would attack him on his blind spots and kill him. The battle was bloody, Kenzurai died but killed five out of seven of them and Ikuto was one of the survivor . As they judged it is over, Kenzurai lying on the ground covered by blood anywhere was trting to speak something. "T .. Tha ..". Ikuto took a couple of steps to hear his friend's last words. "Thank you .." Kenzurai answered with a smile knowing that he could now see his parents in the other side but he was wrong.

Kenzurai woke up and expected that he was in his parent's place where he would live peacefully but it was dark, he couldn't see anyone except for himself. A moment passed, he heard voices, a voice of a man and a woman speaking his name "Kenzurai-kun .. Kenzurai-kun ...". He answered "ma .. pa .. ?" as his eyes fell like he was very happy expecting that he could see his parents. "Listen Kenzurai-kun .. we will see each other someday .. but not now .. its not your time yet, son .." his father's voice said. "That's right Kenzurai-kun .. your still 16 and your just 25 years on the Soul Society but your still 16 as your human age .." his mother's voice said. Kenzurai with his shivering voice asked "ma .. pa .. what do you mean ??". His parent's voice vanished and another unfamiliar voice spoke "Hello there .. ready for your next mission ?". Kenzurai asked again "W-what mission ?". The voice laughed and answered with a happy voice "Ohh .. sorry .. you will know it soon .. just pick this thing up ..". A flash of light appeared and it is lightening a mask. Kenzurai took few steps and picked the mask up. That man introduced himself and his name was Gabriel Cielo, a Vizard. He explained everything to Kenzurai including on how to control his Hollow. Gabriel trained him with his other members until Kenzurai successfully learned it but not mastered yet. After years of training, Gabriel Cielo observed that Kenzurai is a very skilled Vizard so he gave him a name, Raijin Kenzurai [Kenzurai the Lightning God].

Ikuto on the jail was visited by his shinigami friend. "Murasato ?" he was surprised. "Ikuto-senpai .. i thought you killed him already .. he was very fast .. no one in the Division had scratched his skin nor his cloth. He was so powerful, from being a weak and low-leveled shinigami, he became a destructible monster with a blade ,.. he's changed .." Murasato's news on the friend. "Your saying it too much .. who's that shinigami your saying ? .. i have killed a lot .." he asked with yelling voice. Murasato's lips shped as he was saying his name .. "Raijin .. Kenzurai .. a Vizard member .."

ZanpakutÃŽ Spirit:

- Kenzurai's Zanpakuto was Hanshorashi [Midnight Tempest], an armored ninja assassin wearing a black robe and a farmer's hat. It's inner world the sky made up of clouds and rumbling of lightning can be anywhere. A lightning bolt will hit Kenzurai when entering and leaving the place.

Sealed ZanpakutÃŽ :

- A normal katana with a handle with blue flame-like markings on it.

Shikai Description:

- The length of the sword increases up to 5 cm and has the shape of a lightning bolt which shows spikes. Also, the guard turns into a shape of five bladed shuriken. The release of his Zanpakutō comes with an extreme release of spiritual pressure affecting all in the area, and can be felt for miles upon miles

Shikai Abilities:

- When entering the shikai state, the clouds in the sky would be circling until it becomes a torrent of thunderclouds, then a pure condensed lightning bolt will hit Kenzurai with such speed. The lightning pressure would destroy the small area where Kenzurai occurs changing the shape of his sword. His shikai would allow him to absorb lightning from the surroundings or release it from his body and manipulate it with great precision. When releasing the high electricity current, Kenzurai's body will be wrapped by a layer of electrical current that serves as his armor allowing him to electrocute anyone he touches or conduct the pressure of electrical current to any metal conductor he touches. This ability allows him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. The coat or lightning also increases his defense, drastically reducing, if not completely negating, damage from incoming attacks. Kenzurai is capable of using it with his sword to increase its deadliness and power, simply electrocuting enemy when crossed swords.

Techniques:

Midnight Slaying Hawk -- Kenzurai sends a large blade of blue condensed heavy lightning which is capable of creating large scale damage. The power of the projectile is equivalent of 10 times of Hanshourashi's cutting power.

Lightning Emperor's Welcome -- One of Hanshourashi's powers which controls and manipulating lightning at great precision, also, increases the sky's temperature, extremely controlling the weather. He could create both rainstorm and thunderstorm at ease, increasing his advantage on attacks and range. The ability is usable in both Shikai and Bankai modes.

Release: "Spark !!"

Shinigami Skill Level: Kidou:
Shinigami Skill Level: Swordsmanship:
Hollow Skill Level: Sonido:
Hollow Skill Level: Cero/Bala:
Skill Level: Hand-to-Hand:

Bankai Description: Violet Midnight Tempest in Crying Heavens

When entering the bankai mode, Kenzurai would lift the sword pointing into the sky changing the weather, a pure blue lightning bolt will hit him destroying the large area where he stands. His sword will loose its width making it a long katana with violet electric current capable of serving as the blade's coat and extension. The blade could withstand a lot of strong attacks, making it unbreakable. During bankai state, Kenzurai's black robe would be long and white with three violet lines [sleeves and body].

Bankai Abilities:

At Kenzurai's Bankai Mode, the strong electrical current from his body would be powered up turning it into violet lightning and also, its power would be compared to a lightning bolt which is very strong against solid objects especially to rocks. During the state, Kenzurai will then be covered by a thick coat of violet lightning capable of shocking anyone who gets contact with it, he can also electrically stimulate his nervous system and speed up his neural synapses to react faster to danger and push his physical prowess to the absolute limit. Also, during this state, Kenzurai's speed would be same as the lightning's speed and comparable to Arrancar's Sonido which enhances his speed prowess and allows him to create afterimages made by his lightning to confuse his opponent

Techniques:

Enhanced Midnight Slaying Hawk -- At this rate, the Midnight technique will have the color of violet instead of dull blue. The power of the technique is five times more powerful than in Shikai state allowing him to crush many kinds of enhanced defenses. The violet aura of the sword appears at sword swings. During his hollowification, he could release a larger and more powerful Midnight Slaying Hawk which he stated that it is ten times more powerful.

Midnight Lightning Spears -- Kenzurai could make up a violet spears that could be used as projectile and melee weapon. When used as projectile, Kenzurai will point his sword on the enemy then a lot of violet spears will appear on his side also pointing to the enemy. Then at the command "Spark", it would rush and stab the opponent.

Lightning Bomb Clone -- Kenzurai creates a duplication of himself and bursts into lightning when damaged.

Midnight Dragon of the Armored Tempest -- Kenzurai's most powerful attack, after sending a burst of lightning into the sky by raising his sword, his blade would be drained by the sky leaving the handle on his hand alone, then a giant dragon from the sky would be roaring then would attack the opponent guided by Kenzurai. The dragon travels at 1/1000th of a second capable of destroying even the largest building. The technique requires Raijin's Welcome before can be used.

Vizard powers:

Enhanced Hyper Speed: Wearing the mask, Kenzurai would be able to possess the speed of a traveling lightning or it can be described that Kenzurai's movements would be a combination of Shunpo and Sonido but has a lightning effect. He also becomes fast enough to outrun his own energy attacks, allowing him to strike and enhance them or launch simultaneous attacks at the opponent from different angles.

Enhanced Strength and Durability: While using the Hollow mask, Kenzurai gains a substantial increase in strength. His strength is able to block even a destructive force of an Espada's strongest Cero, the Gran Rey Cero.

Enhanced Endurance and Stamina: Apparently, using the Vizard form makes him much more pain resistant.

Enhanced Spiritual Power: While wearing the mask, the spiritual power Kenzurai possesses becomes even greater than before. The volume, concentration, and catastrophic nature of his reiatsu would be very inhuman. Everytime he is wearing the mask, his spiritual energy changes into something similar to that of a hollow.

Power Augmentation: With the acquisition of the mask through the subjugation of one's inner Hollow, Vizard gain access to an additional and separate source of power - aside from the Shinigami powers they already possess - Hollow powers. The accumulation of both powers greatly augments their powers beyond what a Shinigami and/or Hollow alone would be capable of.

Mask Protection: Body damage can seemingly be ignored while wearing their masks, as demonstrated by Ichigo's Hollow during his unwilling transformations.

Telekinesis: Vizard apparently hold varying degrees of telekinesis. For example, in their new Hollowfied form, they employ the ability to call forth their Zanpakutō with a mere flick of the wrist.

Reiryoku Enhancement: Vizard have dual spiritual power of both Shinigami and Hollow, which enhances their abilities.

Violet Dancing Cero: Kenzurai could fire a violet Cero in a form of lightning beam capable of having same as the speed and power of lightning. The Cero is thinner than a normal Cero but when it misses, Kenzurai could use his riatsu to change the technique's direction like a line making an advantage on confident opponents.

Violet Cero Bolt: Kenzurai will fire his Violet Gran Rey Cero at the sky and looks at the opponent. At his will, the Violet Gran Rey Cero will strike from the sky blasting opponent on the ground. This skill is originated from his Dancing Cero.

Mask Shielding: The mask has also shown the ability to block attacks on Kenzurai's body from within his robe, serving as a shield to stop or lessen attacks on him, sometimes saving his life.

Efficiency: Hollow absorb spiritual Power (Reiryoku) from their surroundings, or ingest it from spiritual beings, while shinigami produce their own natural spiritual Power, some of which is then wasted, or leaked out. By combining these two properties the Vizard can reabsorb the spiritual Power that they themselves give off, making their techniques much more efficient. They can also take it in from other sources, further boosting thier power.

Hollow form:
Spoiler:

Hollow mask:
Spoiler:

Resurrección: Do Vizards have Resurrección ???

Roleplay Sample:

In the room which Raiken slept in everything was silent and no light from the outside could pierce it's way through the dark, doubled layered material that was his curtains. Raiken sat up in bed as he slowly rubbed the sleep out of his eyes. As he opened them, he could barely see in his room and sat upright in his bed beginning to think, ponder about what venture he would go on today. Ideas and thoughts shuffled through his mind about possible things and adventures that he could go on but these days he didn't really have much to do. The academy was going to officially open in a couple of weeks and in the time before that Raiken was free to do whatever he felt like in the long and arguous days that life brought him. He wasn't complaining, this would give him a chance to really explore hidden areas of the village which he wasn't allowed to before, or practice his ninja skills before the big day would arrive. All Raiken knew was that he had to find something to do today or he would be stuck at home with his mother again bored out his tree.

Raiken slowly got up out of bed like any young boy would do in the direction of the window. He was going by the bearings that his memory had of his room as he couldn't see his hand in front of him it was so dark. He slowly pulled the curtains back and a rush of sunlight pierced it's way through the window in front of him. Raikenquickly shut his eyes, and after a few minutes opened them again slowly, giving them time to adjust to the new light in the room. He looked up into the sky to see a bright blue blanket spread across it, without a cloud in site. Raiken always knew what the day was going to be like by looking at the sky. It was part of his clan heritage which he valued and respected very much. He was always intreged with the sky above him and could look at it hours on end without moving. But he wasn't going to do that today, no he was going to first have a shower and then travel into the inner city of Kumogakure to scope out something interesting to .

After having a shower at home and eating the breakfast his mother laid out of him on the table he packed up a few things and told her he was going out for the day. Like always she said "Be careful Raiken, you never know what kind of nasty person is out there," and like always he shrugged it off. Raiken stepped out onto the walm stone path just outside his house searching which way to go, he had to find the fasted route to town as he was going on foot. On his travels he began to think of something to do for he was bored out of his mind. He scanned what was the inner city of Kumogakure a head of him, as his home was not far away from town only a couple minutes walk. He scanned over all the old buildings and shops looking for a place for his adventure to start. He passed many places all for which he ahd been before. Finally he stopped and glanced at a large building in front of him. It was very old looking like every other building in the cvillage, but enscribed on the side of the large stair case leading up to a large wooden door was the word [Library].

Raiken stopped and looked up at the building which towered over him like he was an ant. It had surprised him but he had never been here before. Such a large building and his mother never took him there. Raiken was fascinated by the large building and he slowly walked up the steps to venture inside. It was easy to say that Raiken wasn't obsessed or intreged by books and scrolls that much, but that wasn't the main reason he was here. Sure, he would give a couple a good go at reading them but it had never really interested him that much. What Raiken really wanted to do was venture through the library and find secret rooms and catacombs which no one knew about but the Raikage himself. Raiken had quite the imagination on him like any other young, curious boy his age. As he walked up to the top of the steps he began to slowly push on the large double wooden doors. Crazy ideas and thoughts rushed through his mind like a stick being swept down a rushing stream. As the large doors began to open Raiken wondered what amazing things would be inside. His adventure for the day was just beginning....

Raiken pushed the large wooden doors open with force as they were quite heavy. He wondered why it wasn't open already, it was the middle of the day and he was sure many people would pass through the place, it was just rude to have the doors shut. Raiken wasn't completely wrong either. The library wasn't exactly packed but it still had a large number of people walking around, or reading books at tables. The inside was quite elaborate and decrative. The inside of the building was as old-fashioned as the outside, and this was to be expected. Raiken walked inside slowly his eyes darting from one side of the room to the other. He had never seen so many books and scrolls in his life before, the walls being covered in them in all directions.

Raiken walked up the main enterance up to a counter. There was a small, older looking lady perched in a black chair behind the large counter writing on a long scroll. "Well hello there dear, how may I help you?" she said with a kind voice. Raiken didn't really know what he wanted, he wasn't exactly sure what to look for in the his. He asked her about the place and what kinds of things he could find in here. She replied quickly and proptly, spitting out a thousand words at a time, explaining everything there is to know about books. Raiken's brain could barely handle everything she was saying so he politely ended the conversation and went to explore the area himself.

There were many corridors and rooms which people were quietly sat at reading or writing. Naturally, Raiken came across area's which he and the public were restricted to and he thought this must be the area where the hidden secrets of the village were kept or forbidden jutsu for ninja never to set their eyes on. He turned his head to the left, and then to the right. The corridor on which he stood was empty except his own two feet. He then went to turn the knob on the turn to open it, being very cautious not to set off any alarms or anything. But the door wouldn't budge so he looked around up and over it. there happened to be a couple of seals on the door which raiken had noticed. "Darn, I'm never going to be able to open the door with those things on them." But as eager as he was he tried anyway.

Suddenly a man came out from no where "Hey kid, what do you think your doing." Raiken looked up at him with a guilty look on his face, and without any hesitation he ran for the door. The man quickly followed him nipping at his heels every stride that he took. The man didn't look like a ninja, and Raiken thought that he might work here but he wasn't going to take any chances. He quickly ran in between two woman who hurtled their books up in the air in shock. Raiken turned his head around still running, and had a little chuckle but he didn't have time as the man was still following. Raiken then pushed through another door and finally the main exit was in his sight. He jumped over a chair and lunged himself forward for the door. He quickly pulled it open and ran down the stairs. The man stood at the door with his arms on his legs panting heavily. "If I ever catch you around here again you little brat, you will be sorry!" Raiken poked his head out from around the corner where he hid, his heart fluttering at a million miles an hour. it was only the morning but Raiken could tell the today was going to be an eventful one.


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PostSubject: Re: Ichiryu, Kenzurai   Ichiryu, Kenzurai Icon_minitimeFri May 14, 2010 4:08 pm

A few things before I accept it

1. In his bankai his sword is "unbreakable"? Can you fix that? Nothing is unbreakable here.

2. You don't get to choose your stats until we give you an approved number. I'm thinking about giving you a 1-3 tier because we are in short supply of Vizard, so 1 Tier is allowed 2 Advanced on their skills.

3. Can you make the history a bit more clear on how he received his vizard powers?

If you make these changes, I will most likely accept him after I also get a 2nd opinion on him.
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PostSubject: Re: Ichiryu, Kenzurai   Ichiryu, Kenzurai Icon_minitimeSat May 15, 2010 9:22 am

fixed and done !! whooshhh ! question !! why does the vizard template contains a Ressurecion ? i tot it was only in Arrancar ?
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PostSubject: Re: Ichiryu, Kenzurai   Ichiryu, Kenzurai Icon_minitimeSat May 15, 2010 9:27 am

Approved after you modify his age. 17 just seems a little too young for me. Try an for an older age. I would shoot for at least 30. If any other admin has a problem with this application, please contact me and we will discuss it. For now though you are free to RP with this character.

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Also, from what Tousen did in the manga along with Ichigo, we believe Vizards have that ability. This application is also subject to change tier since I was quite unsure about it. Other staff will be reading this so do not be surprised.


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PostSubject: Re: Ichiryu, Kenzurai   Ichiryu, Kenzurai Icon_minitimeSat May 15, 2010 9:32 am

done ! but I don't think Tousen is a Vizard ? he's an Arrancar right ?
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PostSubject: Re: Ichiryu, Kenzurai   Ichiryu, Kenzurai Icon_minitimeSat May 15, 2010 10:12 am

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Shinigami Skill Level: Kidou: Adept

Shinigami Skill Level: Swordsmanship: Advanced

Hollow Skill Level: Sonido: Advaced

Hollow Skill Level: Cero/Bala: Adept

Skill Level: Hand-to-Hand: Adept


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PostSubject: Re: Ichiryu, Kenzurai   Ichiryu, Kenzurai Icon_minitimeSun May 16, 2010 2:45 am

You get 2 advanced. Also, Tousen was a Vizard. It is impossible to go from Shinigami to Arrancar.
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PostSubject: Re: Ichiryu, Kenzurai   Ichiryu, Kenzurai Icon_minitimeSun May 16, 2010 8:13 am

Finished ,, ohh .. on the wiki .. he was a hollow-shinigami hybrid ..
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PostSubject: Re: Ichiryu, Kenzurai   Ichiryu, Kenzurai Icon_minitimeSun May 16, 2010 12:07 pm

well, Hollow-Shinigami hybrids are Vizards. Arrancars are also Hollow-Shinigami hybrids, but since Tosen was a Shinigami first, he is considered a Vizard. Even though he had a ressureccion.
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