musashi keoto (vizard)

Name:Musashi Keoto

Gender:Male

real age: 500 (Looks: 21)

Personality: Calm and warm hearted -Basically he is a very calm man and feels he is simply one with nature. Being also a loving person he cares about others. he is also very shy around females sometimes and tends to blush when he really likes them. At times he is considred ''goofy'' when he is having fun and tends to get hyper alot. When he gets mad he is very destructive, and rageful having no mercy when he fights anyone even if they are in extreme pain.

appearence:(as seen in my avatar picture)

Background/History: 300 years ago he graduated from the shinigami academy.As he went to his home in the western part of rukongai to visit is mother and father, only to find them dead. Over there body are 5 unnamed shinigami. as he pulled out his own zanpakuto prepared to kill them thinking that they killed his parents (when really they didnt) his reiatsu bursted out into an uncontrolable rage he killed the 5 shinigami . as he stood over his parents corpses to look at them one last time he noticed that they had hollow masks on there faces. as he was shocked to see this he stayed with there corpses crying over them. 1 year later it is revealed that he joined soul society in hopes to find the hollow that killed his parents. he was assigned a mission to investigate the dissapearence of the dissapearence of some shinigami who went to the forest of menos in search for a missing lieutenant who was gone for quite some time.he and 6 other shinigami went off to investiage in the menos forest. He was assigned as his platoon leader for the mission . When they arrived in the menos forest they immediatly find the missing lietunant hollowfied along with 6 other hollowfied shinigami .The group fight off the 7 hollows as it was an even match for them. As Musashi attacks the ''leader'' of the group he was stabbed by its blade in the chest as his eyes changed into pure red as he snapped the blade with a large ammount of ease he finished it off with a final attack. his teammates were killed by there opponent and so the 6 hollowfied shinigami attack musashi. but then he obtained a pure white hollow mask as id shot an extremely large cero at them destroying them with ease. as there reiatsu seemed to pour into his mask he tried to contain himself stabbing the mask as it would shatter into hundreds of tiny peaces. as he went back to soul society to report this he came to find thousands of hollowofied shinigami attacking the rukongai . He immediatly helped with the situtation quickly. after hours of fighting the shinigami defeated them and he countined to his report. 50 years have passed since his parents death. he has replaced the hollowfied lieutenat. he finnaly released his shikai with relative ease since then. however a mission was assinged to him to find an imperfect arrancar who is roaming around the human world. he is assinged this mission alone and enters the human world. He searches for the arrancar everywhere with no sign of it for 3 hours. Suddenly he sences spirtual pressure equivalent to his own. He finds the arrancar in a park waiting for him as it then attacks him quickly.After a fierce battle with the arrancar both of them are heavily wounded. as the arrancar had its resserection released he is laughing insanely. musashi with his shikai out attempts to finish the arrancar off with his most strongest attack. but before he dose this his eyes turn pure red and his eyesight becomes red tinted as his hollow mask from 50 years ago comes back to him and he gose on a rampage and finishes off the arrancar. He is later seen with his shinigami uniform removed from him and his vizard mask removed from his face holding his zanpakuto and his mask in each hand as he seems to run off into the human world hiding from soul society for 250 years.

ZANPAKUTO SPIRIT:Musashi's zanpakuto's name is appolyn he is seen as a sillhouted figure in his materialized state having black angelic wings.He Lives in an area that seems to look like space with stars everywhere. other then that there is not much known about his zanpakuto spirit. although it seems to be exsactly like musashi himself personality wise.

SEALED: as the zanpakuto is seen it's seen to be a katana with a round orange hilt the bottom of the hilt being black.

Shikai desription: The shikai apon relase bursts into pure black reiatsu when it is revealed it is a pure long sword that is entirely black with a red diamond inbetween the hilt and the blade itsself.It also has a small black ribbon on the end of it as it seems to be as long as musashi himself (which is 5 foot 7 inches). The red diamond glows throughout its realese and turns white whenever its reiatsu is at a maximum and changes into purple when his vizard mask is activated

Shikai abbilities:

thousand stars from the heavens[/u]- musashi aims his zanpakuto at the sky shooting a bright white beam of light, forcing the sky to turn black . when the beam of light stops 1000s of orbs shoot from the sky apon impact it would explode and desinegrate any object in its path. each explosion is about 10 stories all around most of the time this leaves the battle grounds in ruins this attack can only be used once per battle.

Oshi(push)-This abbility allows appolyn to use spirtual pressure to push an opponent whos spirtual pressure is equal to his own. However if this is used on a person whos spirtual pressure is stronger then his own it will only minorly wound them equivalent to a punch rather then a push.This abbility can also be used on objects such as boulders or even appolyn himself to stab the enemy from afar.

kone(pull)- This abbility is also used similiar to the oshi abbility only opponents with weaker spirtual pressure can be pulled into appolyns blade impaling them. In some cases the kone and oshi are used most commonly by musashi when fighting.

suisei(comet)- musashi cuts open a portal infront of him in which a flaming violet rock shoots out of it hitting the opponent exploding into flames around the opponent with enough heat to melt the targets skin . This attack dosen't have enough explosive force to destroy the landscape just the target in which it is summoned apon. this technique has to span 10 minutes every time before it can be used again.
Gachan(slam)- This abbility uses the spirtual pressure to crush the target it is used apon into the ground this abbility is activated when musashi thrusts his blade at the ground casuseing an invisble force to slam the opponent and make a crater. only lieutenant level shinigami survive this type of force (though they are seen being limp and weakened after the attack) and it barely effects captain level shinigami or higher it just simply minorly wounds them.


Release command: ''Destroy all of creation appolyn!''

Hollow powers: He has the abbility to use cero as well as further augumentation of all his natural abbilities.
The most unique his abbilities get is that he is abble to use some unusual kido abbilities such as using reiatsu to attack and defend himself apon certain blade or hand movements. also being able to shoot small red bala blasts from the tip of his blade which normally would be an arrancar abbility which is ver unusual and unique.

Hollow form: In his hollow form his mask is black and white on each side of the mask and a red line going down the middle of it. his entire body is pure white hierro having black wings and is grown to 7 feet 7 inches. his hands are also claw like and grown 3 times its original size as well as his feet and looks like a demonic angel in short.
with also the added abbilities to shoot sharp feathers and his hierro is much more harder to damage.

Hollow mask: his mask shows his eyeslots being pure red and his mask seems to be blank other then being half black and half white with a small red line going down the middle of the mask. He can hold his hollow mask for a long period of time though it is easily removed with a strong pointblank attack.


Roleplay sample: As seven hollows formed around musashi each with there own unique features as id quickly remove my blade from its sheath as one of the hollows charged at him he'd shunpo several feet away from it, the claw hitting the ground making a crater as big as it's hand.'' I must end this quickly im afraid'' he said , placing his hand apon his face. As red reiatsu appeared in a mask form around his face as it cleared showing his pure red eyes. His mask being black on the right side of the mask and white on the left there was a red line that seperated them in the middle. As the 7 gruesome hollows ran at him he aimed his sealed zanpakuto at the hollows as thousands of human head sized bala blasts at the hollows with enough force to push them all back into a small buidling as civilians ran out of the building trying to evacuate. as id jump into the air putting the blade is defensive form as a cero charged along his knuckles as a bright red cero shot out at the building as musashi shoot a mile further into the sky as it destroied the building killing some humans in the process as he destrioed the hollows who were put into the building as it destroyed the building in the process making a huge crater as id tap the mask lightly as it shattered as he fell from the sky putting his sealed sword in his sheath as he fell on his two feet fixing his black and orange long sleeved shirt dusting it off as he would flash step away from the area '' my work is done'' he said as he ran off aimlessly

denied...If your going to start out as a vizard your going to have to do alot better than this. First of all, do an entire redo on your abilities.

Shikai abbilities:

thousand stars from the heavens[/u]- musashi aims his zanpakuto at the sky shooting a bright white beam of light, forcing the sky to turn black . when the beam of light stops 1000s of orbs shoot from the sky apon impact it would explode and desinegrate any object in its path. each explosion is about 10 stories all around most of the time this leaves the battle grounds in ruins this attack can only be used once per battle.


Thats a shikai, not a bankai. Fix it your character in itself is way to overpowered. Not to mention the history was just completely cram packed. You need to completely redo both.